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we live in a plantation of wires, of ruptured
tires – of dragged asunder
dreams & of cotton candy strings;
phantasms are common, merely
lost inside the chasms, & we all hold hands under
a rotting sun, under shunning the chosen one;
a people of pure blood, we’ve said – falsehoods,
are all that we’ve bred;
can you believe, can’t you perceive?
the trees are wreathed in
smiles; velvet veins drag on for m i l e s,
yet we still try, yet we still lie;
when taciturnity falls to you, to the moon,
our existence com pro mises –
held at filament’s cove, held to the blades of jove;
my insides are woolly yarn & with buttons
for eyes, you seem so surprised –
“no sir, i simply feel much more a l i v e…”
pitter-patter of a long forgotten tabby,
a pulsing tatter, of our mourning mentalities
that once jeopardized our realities;
we expect nothing more, nothing less, nothing
but our repulsive jest; hold fast,
hold hard because our ghosts are already racing past;
seas of split-open, magnanimous &
cut (
“dear, can you please turn off the l i g h t s?”
tires – of dragged asunder
dreams & of cotton candy strings;
phantasms are common, merely
lost inside the chasms, & we all hold hands under
a rotting sun, under shunning the chosen one;
a people of pure blood, we’ve said – falsehoods,
are all that we’ve bred;
can you believe, can’t you perceive?
the trees are wreathed in
smiles; velvet veins drag on for m i l e s,
yet we still try, yet we still lie;
when taciturnity falls to you, to the moon,
our existence com pro mises –
held at filament’s cove, held to the blades of jove;
my insides are woolly yarn & with buttons
for eyes, you seem so surprised –
“no sir, i simply feel much more a l i v e…”
pitter-patter of a long forgotten tabby,
a pulsing tatter, of our mourning mentalities
that once jeopardized our realities;
we expect nothing more, nothing less, nothing
but our repulsive jest; hold fast,
hold hard because our ghosts are already racing past;
seas of split-open, magnanimous &
cut (
ripped
) apart plights…“dear, can you please turn off the l i g h t s?”
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Sorry I didn't give you a critique, I'm not sure exactly what to write buuuut... I will comment
1. Amazing poem, you really make a person think about exactly what you mean
2. Creative word choice, awesome
3. Lastly, The way you "harmonize insanity" is beautiful!
1. Amazing poem, you really make a person think about exactly what you mean
2. Creative word choice, awesome
3. Lastly, The way you "harmonize insanity" is beautiful!